Week 4~ Grading Session

[Leviathan]

Name: Kin G. Doom
Faction: Pirates
Mission: Chapter 1: A Wayward Journey Begins

Word Count: 2742
TD based on WC: 274

Spelling/Grammar: 3 /4
Grader's Opinion: 3 /5
Personal Creativity: 1 /1
Grade: 7 /10

Personal Creativity +100 TD

Total Bonus: 127

Newbie Bonus +10%

Total 'Total Development' awarded: 441

Not bad at all, for a first mission. There were a few minor spelling mistakes (for example, using the incorrect variation of 'there'), and some grammar issues that interrupted the flow of your mission, yet it's not something I'm worried about as everybody gets better the more they write and the more feedback they receive. Eventually, you'll be able to write massive, detailed missions with a level of natural ease that only comes with practise and patience. I look forwards to reading more from you, keep up the good work *nods*.

[Leviathan]

Name: Splice Willow
Faction: Pirates
Mission: Chapter 1: A Chance for Promotion

Word Count: 2092
TD based on WC: 209

Spelling/Grammar: 4 /4
Grader's Opinion: 4 /5
Personal Creativity: 1 /1
Grade: 9 /10

Personal Creativity +100 TD

Total Bonus: 142

Newbie Bonus +10%

Total 'Total Development'awarded: 386

[Behemoth]

Name: Morrigan Rassalion
Faction: Pirate
Mission: Chapter 1: Honourbound

Word Count: 25000
TD based on WC: 2500

Spelling/Grammar: 3 /4
Grader's Opinion: 5 /5
Personal Creativity: 1 /1
Grade: 9 /10

Personal Creativity +100TD

Total Bonus: 600


Total Total Development awarded: 3100

Excellent story, I liked the introduction of your first mate, YonYon seems like he/she is gunna be a lot of fun to write for. There were a few spelling mistakes/mistypes in the first half of the mission other than that its practically impossible to fault. Good Job

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