Week ~9 Grading Session

[Leviathan]

Name: Vitani Kikan
Faction: Bounty Hunters
Mission: Chapter 1: The Brave and the Bold: Set Sail for Destiny!

Word Count: 2387
TD based on WC: 239

Spelling/Grammar: 3 /4
Grader's Opinion: 3 /5
Personal Creativity: 1 /1
Grade: 7 /10

Personal Creativity +100 TD
Division Bonus +100 TD

Total Bonus: 224

Newbie Bonus +10%

Total Development awarded: 509

A few errors here and there, but nothing major. You do, however, need to take care with your sentences as you keep cutting across yourself. It makes reading your writing very jittery, cohesion is the key!


Name: Monoka Devona III
Faction: Pirates
Mission: Sid Viscous

Word Count: 1321
TD based on WC: 132

Spelling/Grammar: 4 /4
Grader's Opinion: 4 /5
Personal Creativity: 1 /1
Grade: 9 /10

Personal Creativity +100 TD
Division Bonus +100 TD

Total Bonus: 226

Newbie Bonus +10%

Total Development awarded: 394